By Raven Leilani
Whenever I, a person raised both Christian and corny, encounter something truly sinful — so delicious that it feels illicit; too much, but sneak me a little more when no one’s looking — I feel a need to remark on it with a “whew.” “Whew,” expressed in the side text to the group text, about one friend’s response to another that was slightly too cutting but hurt in the way it needed to. “Whew” to the woman one recent morning in Brooklyn’s Herbert Von King Park, as immersed in her phone as I was in the gentle lift of her calf down her golden brown leg. “Whew” to the first breeze from the air-conditioning unit in my bedroom window on a steamy morning, “whew” to a truth that keeps finding me despite my constant dodging, “whew” to “Luster.”
Raven Leilani’s first novel reads like summer: sentences like ice that crackle or melt into a languorous drip; plot suddenly, wildly flying forward like a bike down a hill. Edie is a 23-year-old New Yorker dissatisfied with everything. Her Bushwick walk-up reeks of fish, or broccoli; mice and roaches live alongside her and her roommate. During the day, her publishing job provides her with barely enough money to get by; at night, it feeds her with a cast of sexual partners — “What they say about not [expletive] where you eat only holds if they pay you enough to eat,” she thinks — including one man for whom she thaws into true affection. He leads her on not just romantically but professionally, encouraging her artistic interests — Edie is a painter — threading her hope that she can move out of editorial and into visual work for the company, but dumping her after her mother dies. She stops painting. But then she meets Eric, a white digital archivist twice her age, on a dating website, and she is charmed by the softness of his profile pictures, the ease with which they discuss the uglier parts of life. His “retired internet slang” and earnestness are, “compared to the inscrutable advances of younger men, … a relief.” In his first message, he tells her he’s in an open marriage.
Like Edie, Leilani has a ruthless knack for the somatic, rendering flesh on paper as alluring and unidealized as it is right next to you. On their first date, at an amusement park, Edie finds Eric’s abject joy “raw in a way that makes me feel like I can unzip my skin suit and show him all the ooze inside.” After a month of seeing each other, meticulously following the rules set forth by Eric’s wife (Eric must always pick up when Rebecca calls; Edie and Eric get tested for S.T.D.s together), they finally have clumsy, domestic sex in his bedroom when Rebecca is out of town. Edie, worked up at the sight of extra towels in the en-suite bathroom (placed there by Rebecca, no doubt), accidentally calls Eric “Daddy”; Eric, worked up at this tremendous turn-on, accidentally tells Edie he loves her. Afterward, “looking like he has not so much had an orgasm as experienced an arduous exorcism,” he immediately sends her home in a cab, and ignores all her subsequent calls and texts. Ten days later, nonplussed, Edie goes to New Jersey and lets herself into Eric’s seemingly empty home, running her hands over the lemons on the counter, drinking milk straight from the jug and coming face-to-face with his wife, who invites her to stay for dinner.
[ Read an excerpt from “Luster.” ]
This scene unfolds like a shaky film projection on the wall, cut with memories of the first time Edie had sex, which resulted in a pregnancy, then an abortion: “To invite admiration or ridicule, you first have to be seen. So the story of the cell that once divided inside me and its subsequent obliteration is also the story of the first man who saw me.” “Dinner” is actually an invitation to Eric and Rebecca’s anniversary party, and when Rebecca brings out the cake, she makes Edie light the candle. Strangest of all in this entire bizarre ordeal is the unexplained appearance of “a Black child in a pink wig and a tummy shirt, smoking a candy cigarette”: Akila, Eric and Rebecca’s adopted daughter. After Eric drives Edie home — “You’re wearing my wife’s dress,” he tells her in the car, and asks if he can slap her in the face, which leads to crunched, furtive sex in the front seat — she receives a voice mail from his wife, inviting her back.